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The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...

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  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    We didn’t play for long, or maybe I should say we didn’t play for long enough.

    TK was folding most every hand he was dealt, and little Lamb was shooting off in the other direction. Kid couldn’t get enough. Seems every time he was holding two cards he was sticking around til the end, no matter what he showed up with. I was somewhere in the middle, which was good for a couple of bucks. Amber’s birthday was round the corner, and if she was still hanging on by then I guessed I’d buy her a nice fur – mink or rabbit.

    One hand I got a pair of queens, so I stuck in a raise, you know, before the community cards come down. TK mumbles to himself, squares up his hair, then folds dramatically like he’d done for the last forty-five minutes. Meanwhile I poured myself another. I knew Lamb was good for a call, and sure enough he does.

    Cards in the middle are all hearts. A ten, a three. Maybe a seven as well, I forget. I got the queen of hearts. I threw in a bet and Lamb just calls me, so I’m wondering if he has a couple of hearts in his hand. Fourth street is the club king, so I size up Lamb for a bit, but I can tell he don’t have one of them. I stick in another bet and the kid calls that too. Fifth street is another heart so now I got a suited hand. Five hearts, up to the lady. Pretty good. Now I put in the rest of my money, and I even throw in the pocket watch my grandfather gave me when I were a boy. Lamb looks at me, shaking like he needs to hit the head. Finally he calls my bet and shows a ten with a jack of hearts, so I pulled all the money towards me and smiled.

    I
     guess I showed them how it’s done, but Lamb’s always paying attention. He’ll be a good player one of these days, for sure.
  • LARSON7LARSON7 Member Posts: 4,495
    edited January 2014
    Nice work slippy

    Ebook in the making? lol
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    Nice work slippy Ebook in the making? lol
    Posted by LARSON7
    I am merely the messenger, mate. I'd hate to pass someone else's words as my own!
  • LARSON7LARSON7 Member Posts: 4,495
    edited January 2014
    lol

    My friend just made an ebook about standard grade history. This was in the last few months.

    Of course standard grades are being abolished lol

    What i'm saying is, you are writing a timeless piece here.

    Keep it going JK
  • FlyingDaggFlyingDagg Member Posts: 4,146
    edited January 2014
    A nice work of fiction Slip. Too many coincidences for it to be genuine although I did believe it at first. Coincidentally I have the new Rory Gallagher CD which is a special pack containing a crime novella  written by Ian Rankin. The style of writing perfectly matches yours.
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    A nice work of fiction Slip. Too many coincidences for it to be genuine although I did believe it at first. Coincidentally I have the new Rory Gallagher CD which is a special pack containing a crime novella  written by Ian Rankin. The style of writing perfectly matches yours.
    Posted by FlyingDagg
    Nice work of fiction? You try and share an old Italian-American guy's tales about his introduction to the game with the forum and nobody buys it. Sad world we live in when you can't trust another poker player.

    But I'm positive Tommy C would be chuffed with the comparison, Dagg ;)
  • DonttelmumDonttelmum Member Posts: 1,921
    edited January 2014
    Pics?
  • FlyingDaggFlyingDagg Member Posts: 4,146
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932... : Nice work of fiction? You try and share an old Italian-American guy's tales about his introduction to the game with the forum and nobody buys it. Sad world we live in when you can't trust another poker player. But I'm positive Tommy C would be chuffed with the comparison, Dagg ;)
    Posted by Slipwater
    BIB LOL. TommyC? Lambert? TK? I rest my case.

    My theory: Being Scottish your a fan of the writings of Ian Rankin/ Rebus and decided to buy the Rory CD with the Rankin Novella. Thus inspired by his American crime story you decide to do a poker related one. Am I close?
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932... : BIB LOL. TommyC? Lambert? TK? I rest my case. My theory: Being Scottish your a fan of the writings of Ian Rankin/ Rebus and decided to buy the Rory CD with the Rankin Novella. Thus inspired by his American crime story you decide to do a poker related one. Am I close?
    Posted by FlyingDagg
    It is actually Lamberto, but I take your point ;)

    I have never read any of Rankin's work as it happens, but have read a lot of crime/thriller novels in my time. I have dabbled in the genre with my own writing as well.
  • FlyingDaggFlyingDagg Member Posts: 4,146
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932... : It is actually Lamberto , but I take your point ;)I have never read any of Rankin's work as it happens, but have read a lot of crime/thriller novels in my time. I have dabbled in the genre with my own writing as well.
    Posted by Slipwater
    You should do especially the novella that comes with the Rory Gallagher CD (Amazon about £15). Shameless plug Rainman style  for the greatest blues/rock guitarist Ireland has ever produced.
  • YOYOYYOYOY Member Posts: 130
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    A nice work of fiction Slip. Too many coincidences for it to be genuine although I did believe it at first. Coincidentally I have the new Rory Gallagher CD which is a special pack containing a crime novella  written by Ian Rankin. The style of writing perfectly matches yours.
    Posted by FlyingDagg

    Do you find you're having difficulty picking up a bluff lately?
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    April 14, 1932
    I had some work to do this morning – I had to go see Fat Harry about a guy who’d been shirking his duty on the booze we’d sold him. But I didn’t mind. It was a nice day. I took my baseball bat, but as it turned out I didn’t need it.

    It was Amber’s birthday last night. I picked her up this real sweet fur from a guy I knew at the market, and there was enough left over from my game against TK and Lamb to spill for a necklace too, though if I’m being honest, I didn’t have to spray too much for the jewels. Sometimes it pays to be me in this town, you know.

    Amber loved the gifts, even if I’d not wrapped them. Guys didn’t do that kind of thing, with the ribbons and the bows. Way I see it, the fur and the diamonds should be good enough, cause you ain’t gonna be wearing the paper. I said it before, but she’s getting to be a rope round my ankles. Maybe I shouldn’t of got her anything, cause now she thinks we’re a bigger deal than we really are. Anyways, I got my eye on this sweet New York Irish girl who works the notepad at Ellie’s Diner uptown. Badge says her name’s Rose. I reckon I’ll be seeing a bit more of her come the weekend.

    I ain’t played much poker since I took Lamb to the cleaners a few days back, though I’ve seen him and a few of the others working the deck down at McGinty’s. There’s been talk of a tournament, so I been thinking bout organising something. Nothing big, just a bunch of the regulars in the bar, maybe a few of my crew. Seems the game’s more popular than I figured when I saw them two guys playing it, cause most everyone seems to be doing it now.

    When I got back home after seeing Fat Harry, Amber was waiting for me wearing the fur and the necklace and not much else besides.
  • gazza127gazza127 Member Posts: 2,156
    edited January 2014
    Ha!

    Fat Harry.
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    Ha! Fat Harry.
    Posted by gazza127
    Well, he is ;)
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    April 23, 1932
    I been juggling Amber and Rose, the Irish thing from Ellie’s, for a week or so. I’m pretty sure they both think I got bits on the side, but thinking ain’t knowing, and as long as there’s doubt then I’m good for a while longer. Right now I’ve got it good, and the minute that changes, I cut them loose.

    This new guy came into McGinty’s last night. Russian I think, or somewhere thereabouts. All I know is that he wasn’t from around here. He went by the name of Ivan Ovich. Tall guy he was, and young too. Maybe early twenties. Kid looks like he ain’t started to shave yet, and there’s this smile on his face that don’t know when to quit.

    Anyways, this Ivan kid turns up with his own pack of cards, so it seems the Commies play as well. He lights up one of them foreign cigars and fans out the cards in front of his face like some Japanese geisha, before he starts to shuffle them. It’s obvious he wants someone to sit down with him, but there’s something about the way his fingers move across the cards that tells me I’d be best standing by and watching for a bit. Sooner or later somebody will give him a game – I’ve seen these hustlers before.

    Sure enough, John comes up to him from his place by the bar. Now, John’s one of them strange characters that I ain’t figured out yet. He’s got this odd ink on his wrist – says 127. I asked him one time what it meant, and he tells me it’s how many men he killed in the Great War a few years back. Could be a bluff: hard to tell. Guy’s got one of them faces that don’t change either way. I reckon it’s the amount of times he been asked that damned stupid question.

    S
    o John sits down with Ivan, and before the Russian’s even dealt the cards he starts talking about odds and percentages and strange things I’d never heard of like equity and merging your range, whatever them thing are. John looks back at me and we both share a shrug, before he turns back to young Ivan and tells him to deal the cards and shut up. 


    I laughed and finished my whiskey.

  • mrsduckmrsduck Member Posts: 1,901
    edited January 2014
    :D Love it! :)
  • hhyftrftdrhhyftrftdr Member Posts: 8,036
    edited January 2014
    Only just seen this. 

    Consulting lawyers as we speak.
  • gazza127gazza127 Member Posts: 2,156
    edited January 2014
    Big grudge match!

    Let me guess... Fat Harry walks in and ruins the fun for everyone?

    Love it so far.




  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    In Response to Re: The Journal of Tommy C, 1932...:
    Only just seen this.  Consulting lawyers as we speak.
    Posted by hhyftrftdr
    You can't sue history, man.
  • SlipwaterSlipwater Member Posts: 3,664
    edited January 2014
    John and Ivan’d been sitting down, trading cards, for about two hours – money going one way then the other – when I hear the bell go off above the door. I look across but there ain’t nobody there, or so it seems.

    I go back to my whiskey and nod for TK to pour me another, and then I feel this tug at the bottom of my jacket. I look down and it’s Matty B, the shortest guy in my crew. He looks up to me and I help him up onto the stool. I ask him of he ever gets a sore neck having to look up at normal-sized people all the time, and he just smiles and shakes his head. He kicks his legs back and forth on the stool like some schoolkid.

    TK comes over with my drink and asks Matty B for his I.D. It’s the same joke every night, but it never gets old. Matty B is ages with me. We grew up in the same neighbourhood. I used to dress him up in soft white baby clothes, get him to cuddle a stuffed elephant, and push him round the streets in a carriage. Eight out of ten people who pinched his cheeks and said how good looking he was didn’t even realise he was thirteen at the time.

    TK pours Matty B a shot of the same stuff I’m drinking and tells him not to tell his mommy and daddy that the nice old man behind the bar let him have it. We all laugh. Matty and I turn round and watch John and the Russian playing.

    I kind of want to get involved, and now that Matt’s arrived, we’ve got a good four, and just as I’m about to make the suggestion, the bell above the door goes again, and in slides Amber.
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