A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated

YOUNG_GUN

Ok i have bought in for 50 bb on each occasion due to bankroll otherwise would by in full. sorry about the many hands but cash i am hit or miss and would like to pick up as much advice as possible

Hand1) I had not played a hand up to this point, was against someone deepstacked and they was playing solid from when i was on the table i'd seen about 10 hands or so.

bfastboy	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£15.92
Jason007	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£9.92
	Your hole cards	Q Q
adonia	Fold
c	Raise		£0.60	£1.05	£36.19
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£1.50	£2.55	£12.65
bfastboy	Fold
Jason007	Fold
c	Call		£0.90	£3.45	£35.29
Flop
		A 10 8
c	Check
YOUNG_GUN	Bet		£1.73	£5.18	£10.92
c	Call		£1.73	£6.91	£33.56
Turn
		5
c	Bet		£3.90	£10.81	£29.66
YOUNG_GUN	Fold
c	Muck

YOUNG_GUN

Hand 2) all i wanted to do is take the blinds, second hand played out of about 20 so figured good spot to take the blinds

adonia	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£29.55
carrotttop	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£23.20
	Your hole cards	A 2
WALLY212	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£1.20	£1.65	£10.65
bfastboy	Fold
Jason007	Fold
adonia	Fold
carrotttop	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Muck

YOUNG_GUN

hand3) 3rd hand played, wont show all hands played just ones i think can be discussed. could i have got more? was a bit worried as straighty board

bb	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£10.66
Jason007	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£7.33
	Your hole cards	8 8
adonia	Fold
carrotttop	Fold
WALLY212	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£0.90	£1.35	£10.95
bb	Call		£0.75	£2.10	£9.91
Jason007	Fold
Flop
		J 8 7
bb	Check
YOUNG_GUN	Bet		£1.05	£3.15	£9.90
bb	Call		£1.05	£4.20	£8.86
Turn
		10
bb	Bet		£2.70	£6.90	£6.16
YOUNG_GUN	All-in		£9.90	£16.80	£0.00
bb	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Muck
YOUNG_GUN	Win		£9.12		£9.12
YOUNG_GUN	Return		£7.20	£0.48	£16.32

YOUNG_GUN

Hand4) Saw a good opportunity the villain had just lost alot of stack and put something in chat was not happy so appeared could be tilting and i had done this move to him a few times

WALLY212	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£35.10
YOUNG_GUN	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£16.02
	Your hole cards	A Q
bb	Call		£0.30	£0.75	£5.86
adonia	Fold
carrotttop	Call		£0.30	£1.05	£32.93
WALLY212	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£1.20	£2.25	£14.82
bb	Call		£1.20	£3.45	£4.66
carrotttop	Fold
Flop
		Q 3 10
YOUNG_GUN	Bet		£1.73	£5.18	£13.09
bb	All-in		£4.66	£9.84	£0.00
YOUNG_GUN	Call		£2.93	£12.77	£10.16
YOUNG_GUN	Show	A Q
bb	Show	K 9
Turn
		7
River
		6
YOUNG_GUN	Win	Pair of Queens	£12.13		£22.29

YOUNG_GUN

Ok this one was debating whether to re-raise pre but decide to flat due to not deep stacked enough, bad flop so decide to get out

YOUNG_GUN	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£22.14
jackl	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£29.70
	Your hole cards	K Q
adonia	Fold
carrotttop	Raise		£0.60	£1.05	£32.33
WALLY212	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Call		£0.45	£1.50	£21.69
jackl	Fold
Flop
		2 A 9
YOUNG_GUN	Check
carrotttop	Bet		£1.20	£2.70	£31.13
YOUNG_GUN	Fold

YOUNG_GUN

3 handed was struggling here due to them being deeper and not getting any hands

carrotttop	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£27.83
YOUNG_GUN	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£19.44
	Your hole cards	Q J
adonia	Fold
carrotttop	Raise		£0.45	£0.90	£27.38
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£1.20	£2.10	£18.24
carrotttop	Call		£0.90	£3.00	£26.48
Flop
		K J 7
carrotttop	Check
YOUNG_GUN	Bet		£1.50	£4.50	£16.74
carrotttop	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Muck
YOUNG_GUN	Win		£2.85		£19.59

YOUNG_GUN

New table

yidarmy747	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£42.52
YOUNG_GUN	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£13.95
	Your hole cards	Q A
gazscoop	Fold
tatohead	Call		£0.30	£0.75	£28.80
corbett04	Fold
BEACHBABY	Fold
yidarmy747	Call		£0.15	£0.90	£42.37
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£0.90	£1.80	£13.05
tatohead	Call		£0.90	£2.70	£27.90
yidarmy747	Call		£0.90	£3.60	£41.47
Flop
		9 Q 9
yidarmy747	Check
YOUNG_GUN	Bet		£1.80	£5.40	£11.25
tatohead	Fold
yidarmy747	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Muck
YOUNG_GUN	Win		£3.42		£14.67

YOUNG_GUN

gazscoop	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£86.45
tatohead	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£29.70
	Your hole cards	A Q
corbett04	Fold
BEACHBABY	Raise		£0.90	£1.35	£37.90
yidarmy747	Call		£0.90	£2.25	£39.37
YOUNG_GUN	Call		£0.90	£3.15	£15.42
gazscoop	Fold
tatohead	Fold
Flop
		J 8 7
BEACHBABY	Check
yidarmy747	Check
YOUNG_GUN	Check
Turn
		7
BEACHBABY	Check
yidarmy747	Bet		£1.80	£4.95	£37.57
YOUNG_GUN	Fold

YOUNG_GUN

Standard hand, probably going in most the time here however i play it

corbett04	Small blind		£0.15	£0.15	£29.55
BEACHBABY	Big blind		£0.30	£0.45	£38.96
	Your hole cards	A A
yidarmy747	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£1.50	£1.95	£13.92
gazscoop	Raise		£3.30	£5.25	£83.15
tatohead	Fold
corbett04	Fold
BEACHBABY	Fold
YOUNG_GUN	Raise		£7.20	£12.45	£6.72
gazscoop	Raise		£21.60	£34.05	£61.55
YOUNG_GUN	All-in		£6.72	£40.77	£0.00
gazscoop	Unmatched bet		£9.48	£31.29	£71.03
YOUNG_GUN	Show	A A
gazscoop	Show	A K
Flop
		7 5 3
Turn
		Q
River
		8
YOUNG_GUN	Win	Pair of Aces	£29.72		£29.72

DOHHHHHHH

Blimey youngster - I'll have a go. 

Btw, using words such as " I, to, at, the, in, on, it " can make things easier to read!!!

1 - 3 bet alot bigger, c bet abit bigger - god knows what I'd do on the turn, it really all depends on the villain who I would probably already have notes on. If I didn't have notes already, I would probably call the turn and fold the river - although I'm not sure if playing half stacked would effect this? 

2 - Again you're playing 33xbb - I don't understand how this shud effect your opening range exactly, but Im raising A2s in the cut off most of the time 100xbb deep, wp.

3 - you open here for 3x bb, hand before was 4 x - why? Bet abit bigger on the flop, turn is fine.

4 - Prob raise slightly bigger pre, flop is fine coz he's so short - bet bigger if he's deeper

5 -  fine

6 - If you're gonna 3 bet JQs, make it bigger, post flop is good.

7 - Raise more pre with 2 limpers - half pot c bet on that board is fine for me, as you're miles ahead or miles behind, and you're hand isn't really vulnerable.

8 - I would 3 bet quite big pre flop here - once u flat pre, post flop is ok.

9 - Opening 5 x this time with no limpers -u probably allow him to fold alot of hands here with the very suspicious 4 bet, but at 30nl once he 3 bets and with your stack - it's always going in, so u can do what u want really, raise another 1p and he will stack off. You probably should just shove - but u can get away with whatever u want. wp.

Prepositions ftw !

YOUNG_GUN

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated:

  Btw, using words such as " I, to, at, the, in, on, it " can make things easier to read!!!
Posted by DOHHHHHHH

Hey mate thanks for looking over, apologise so many hands.  I was going post in area 51 and ask u to look at them glad you have commented thank you.

Dont really understand the above part lol, although i am very bad at writing as you can see.

DOHHHHHHH

really ???

I always thought you just wrote the way you do for short hand?

Surely you know how to construct a sentence properly???

I will copy a couple of examples from above.,.,.....

hand3) 3rd hand played, wont show all hands played just ones i think can be discussed. could i have got more? was a bit worried as straighty board

hand3) 3rd hand played, I wont show all of the hands that I played just the ones i think can be discussed. could i have got more? I was a bit worried about the straighty board

WHY DOES IT NOT GO RED WHEN I WANT IT TO???

Anyway C + YG, must do better.

YOUNG_GUN

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated:

really ??? I always thought you just wrote the way you do for short hand? Surely you know how to construct a sentence properly??? I will copy a couple of examples from above.,.,..... hand3) 3rd hand played, wont show all hands played just ones i think can be discussed. could i have got more? was a bit worried as straighty board hand3) 3rd hand played, I   wont show all of the hands that I played just the ones i think can be discussed. could i have got more? I  was a bit worried about the straighty board WHY DOES IT NOT GO RED WHEN I WANT IT TO??? Anyway C + YG, must do better.
Posted by DOHHHHHHH

lol well most the time it is because its quicker to write jumble, if i was to think about the sentences probably take me a day or so

im happy with a C+ thank you sir :-)

Eagle26

first of all dont post so many hands in a thread its ridicoulous if u want any proper advice!

secondly if u aint bankrolled to play 30nl then dont play it. if u cant afford to buy in full wots the point? surely some1 who posts on ere alot u shud know this?

LOL_RAISE

dont open to 4x if you only have a 35bb stack

dont open to 3x on the button if you only have a 35bb stack

N1CK

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated:

first of all dont post so many hands in a thread its ridicoulous if u want any proper advice! secondly if u aint bankrolled to play 30nl then dont play it. if u cant afford to buy in full wots the point? surely some1 who posts on ere alot u shud know this?
Posted by Eagle26

i agree i just cant be bothered to go through all these hands as i wont remember them and im not wasting paper writing them down... and as for your buy in amounts there is nothing wrong with playing higher limits and shortstacking to keep within your bankroll as long (as you know how to play a shortstack)

YOUNG_GUN

I agree was speaking with dohhhhh, basically i had money to reload iff went wrong and just needed to play something different i do usually buy in full if i can afford it

i wont post so many hands next time sorry

shelski

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated:

I agree was speaking with dohhhhh, basically i had money to reload iff went wrong and just needed to play something different i do usually buy in full if i can afford it i wont post so many hands next time sorry
Posted by YOUNG_GUN

You wot m8 ?
Is this a strategy worthy of pursuit or is this more of your wummery ?
Seriously man what's going on here ?

YOUNG_GUN

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated:

In Response to Re: A few cash hands from last night any advice appreciated : You wot m8 ? Is this a strategy worthy of pursuit or is this more of your wummery ? Seriously man what's going on here ?
Posted by shelski

Look you WUM, i have already pointed out. you want me to explain the explanation huh thats the best your getting